Something Sweet
.by: Shadowkami
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She wanted something sweet.
The sour and slightly biter aftertaste of devoured fruit remained in her mouth sickening her as the drops of cool water fell upon her. Ruining the serenity of the cascade of falling water droplets.
She desired something sweet.
Absently she thought back to better days and memories. The sweet juices of watermelon dripping from her chin and fingers. The sharp tangy citrus of orange and tangerine, and the slightly more biter one of grapefruit. The sweet blood-color juices of cherry as they were eaten and consumed.
And she remembered poison was sweet...
She remembered reports and sayings of the sweet liquid, that though lethal, offered dying men comfort in its taste.
...as was death.
Ah death, the sweetest thing of them all. An instant relief from all the troubles of the world and a passageway to unearthly serenity and heavenly bliss. Ah death, who promised wary travelers solitude and peace in its dark desolate confines. Ah death, who in exchange for mourning fellows offered a final perfect resting place, ah sweet death...
And so she descended the stairs with such unhappy thoughts in her mind...
... and came across an apple. A simple greenish yellow apple, slightly bruised. She smile, remembering sweet cool amber juice descending upon a parched throat, relieving it of its thirst and desire for something sweet.
And so she washed the apple...
... and bit into its white flesh, slightly yellow in the light. Its sweet taste chasing away bad thoughts and dreams, and her sorrows and misfortunes, imperfections and otherwise, leaving her only with the satisfaction of finding something sweet.
And having found that sweet thing, and devouring it in its entirety. She went up the stairs, content, and went to sleep.














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Actually I thought of this story while I was showering xD
... and I thought of the apple part when I went downstairs to grab something to eat. The apple was green so xD
I was going to end the story by having the girl kill herself >>
I'd also like to point out that death by poison is a bloodless death, so adding allusions to blood would basically be pointless.
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... and remember it was really late (early?) when I wrote this so I couldn't write an over-the-top description of the water or anything, by the time I was writing this I really just wanted to go to sleep (I corrected a few typos here and there, but that was about it)
If she seems a bit emotionless, it's because I wanted to focus more on what she was thinking. You could assume that she felt guilt over the thought of leaving loved ones behind, and a bunch of other emotions.
I guess I went a little over-the-top with the thought process and left the emotions behind, but yeah
I was actually thinking of not posting this, so... just be glad I posted it xD
Well some people write stories with no logic at all just a bunc of emotion and those are the kinds of stories I hate so I'm glad I got to see it the other way around this time.
Oh I am glad you posted! You're a wonderful writer with many interesting ideas ^^
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Logical stories are more bland and not very many people like to read them, since it's "boring" (think non-fiction), I think it would take a very dedicated individual to be able to sit through one and read it till the end xD
And thank you ^^, I may not like how my stories end up, but the ideas are always interesting. Maybe in the future I share some with you ne~?
Thanks for the correction, I told you it was late when I wrote this xD
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